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These are the professors comments on the previously submitted paper…………………………………………………… This is very good, but I would like to see more textual evidence from the play. This what is really missing. Quote from the play! Just don’t tell me, show me! And I need to see more evidence and/or citation from the film where you are talking about the film in the paper because you have either quoted, summarized, paraphrased or analyzed from a direct scene. These are what is missing and I need to see them utilized where you talk about those moments – show, show, show! Cite, cite, cite! Also, Corrigan’s Literature into Film is REQUIRED for use.(One of the documents I’ve uploaded) You need to include what he says in those short pages into your paper. That is a foundation for your argument! ………………………………………………I’ve also included in the uploaded word document with comments that were left on particular sections of the paper as well as the PDF of the play. ………….. Once again the assignment is as follows your argument will be centered around the: adaption process limitations of the stage vs. ability of film enhancements, changes, additions, faithfulness, etc.
