1. In the paper, notice how the writer integrates the first two sources into the second paragraph. How do these two sources relate to each other? How could the student have made the relationship clearer? (Answer in ~3-4 sentences.) For example, you might consider if the sources are similar or different, if they support each other or contradict each other, or some other observation.
2. The writer cited Zhang & Goza (2016) in various parts of the paper. What did these authors add to the literature on the elder care in China, according to this paper? You might focus on paragraphs 2, 3 and 5 (answer in ~3-4 sentences). For example, you might begin, “The research by Zhang & Goza focused specifically on…”
