This paper is fully written but needs some editing and touch ups. I have attached the paper file together with the guidelines, instructions and rubric. Also below is the Professors feedback for the draft. Please incorporate the Professors feedback. Thank you.
Feedback:
You cover everything very well, but I don’t see the discussion of a single decision that you made. You had to react over these 7 years, I can read and understand the table clearly, you need to discuss choices and decisions that you made in relation to those things. Statements like “In year 3 interest rates were dropped in response to XX which lead to unemployment to YYY in the following years” should be included throughout your paper.
