To obtain a high mark it’s important to move beyond description and include analysis, e.g. link up pieces of information, arguments and real-life examples, highlight potential contradictions and opposing perspectives and how these can or cannot be resolved, highlight if you think one point is more important than another and why. Think about your line of reasoning and the justification of statements and whether a reader is likely to disagree with you or have questions in their mind. Are you convincing the potential reader with your reasoning?
