Read your draft out loud. Listen for vague or “filler” words, awkward, wordy, or unclear sentences, and obvious grammar errors. Mark these problems on your draft.
Determine if you’ve added enough detail about the 5 W’s of narration: is it clear WHAT happens? Do you sufficiently describe WHO the characters are in your story? Is it clear WHEN and WHERE this story is taking place? Is it clear WHY this person or event is significant to you? Mark up your draft with suggestions for improvement.
Make the revisions you deemed were necessary in steps 1 and 2.
When you’re satisfied, submit your essay for peer review. Even though your rough draft isn’t due until Week 4, you’ll want to be pondering and planning it now.
