First visit to Bahamas
Drawing on one of the strategies for writing introductions outlined in your text or the lesson, post a draft of your introductory paragraph(s) of your profile essay as your first post. Then, provide helpful, constructive, and specific feedback to at least two of your fellow classmates. Scroll down through the posts and look for students who haven’t received any replies yet first. Note how or why an introduction caught your attention and explain what impression it gives you about the essay’s larger purpose. Also explain how your classmate’s voice, tone, or diction contributes to the overall effectiveness of the introduction.
To earn full credit, be sure to post your introductory paragraph, to provide two thoughtful replies to your fellow classmates, and to participate on at least three different days.
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