-Help correct all my grammar error and help me improve any vocal words that needs to be changed
-try to make number 5 a little shorter.
-the highlight part in yellow are my concerns .
1. for number 8, write a short opinion and add why the author wrote the article to the paragraph (2 sentences overall)
2. for number 9, write a short opinion about spolia and why you chose this article (2 sentences overall and maybe for the reason just talk about ur interests in Sophia or whatever) all the word count should no longer be more than should be range from 700 – 750 not more than that.
