Critically compare any rescue procedure in the UK with the rescue procedure of your chosen jurisdiction, making recommendations to improve either or both systems.

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Critically compare any rescue procedure in the UK with the rescue procedure of your chosen jurisdiction, making recommendations to improve either or both systems.

The question ask for critical compare in these paper of my essay is my way in the writing correct and answer part of question ? Also, can you please check the information in the Voting and Moratorium sections.The main law in this essay are Insolvency Act 1986 and Insolvency rules 2016

Can you please use it and add it in the references? this paper use SCOLA references, Also the recommendation I would like to change it to be personal opinion

Finally, The conclusion need to improve can you make the improvement