Description
1) Make sure the essay flows well and it’s logically connected and responded to the “Discuss a turning point in my life— an event – that helped me understand myself or the world around me in new ways.”
2) Reduce the essay to be more concise by 10-20 words, and make sure my original thoughts are consistent.
3) Make it more meaningful and engaging if possible.
4) Make sure the wording is good intended to show who I am (hard working and strong)
5) Make sure the LAST paragraph is convincing and well thought-out.
