-Be sure to specifically speak to the institutional and social barriers that have impeded his ability to access counseling.
-Be sure to be more specific in what steps you will take to ensure that you as a counselor to a client like Butch will rake to ensure you are objective and avoid bias. What would this look like in your counseling space?
-Be sure to speak to your own culture and how this could impact your work with Butch.
-Be sure to check for grammatical errors prior to submission. is a great resource. Be sure to check for omitted words as this changes the structure and meaning of your text.
