• This section is over the maximum word count, attention is needed only on what is asked for. (PAGE 1+2
• Could provide information why there are 100 participants, later in the section, it sounds like you are selecting 100 people out of a larger population.
• Section iii) information needed on the instruments used, rather than repeating what has already been stated.
• Section 6: The research ethics committee is not part of the supervisory team, the committee is not part of the process, we approve what you outline as the process.
• Outline what it meant by the publishing of the data, is this the thesis or academic articles, this is normally a number of years after the completion of data collection, to allow for the thesis writing and any further publications.
• There is normally a time frame given for removing data from the study, such as 2 weeks after the interviews are completed.
• Section 7: Focus groups were not mentioned within the data collection part of the form. Some clarity of why the identities need to be disclosed, and how this information will be collected, stored, used and disposed of.
