i) What precisely is the intellectual problem / destabilizing condition that you want your claim to address? The draft above does not identify clearly a specific intellectual problem.
ii) What precisely is your contestable and debatable claim? Please review chapter 4 of The Craft of Research (on our Blackboard page) to gain an effective understanding of a claim within an argument.
iii) What benefit will your readers get from your juxtaposition of something very precise and specific in this particular film with something very precise and specific in the Poetics?
