Opportunities for improvement: When you provide edits in RED in in your paper please add discussion on Your Solutions as to why they are sure to work, provide examples of success.
Additional Comments: You mention exposing Cops in the MEDIA is needed to reduce Excessive Force by Law Enforcement, and IMPLICIT BIAS training is needed to stop racism. How is this solution UNIQUE? What is your contribution to the solution of the issue? You are simply restating what others have said.
Next, add to your final paper by addressing the following in 4–5 pages:
Select 1 alternative to your position addressed in your paper regarding your selected topic:
What major points are argued by proponents of this alternative position? Explain in detail.
Conduct research on this alternative position and evaluate the arguments.
Do the arguments hold any merit? Why or why not?
What policies currently exist that support these arguments? Explain in detail.
Which position is more significant for improving the current state of the criminal justice system? Explain in detail.