FEEDBACK FROM MY MENTOR
Form a strategic vision and initiatives
o Develop a clear vision for the future that motivates people to take coordinated actions.
Your vision is unclear. It does not sound like a vision. Start with the words, “Our vision is to…” “We believe our vision will be attained by…” You do not need 2 slides for this. A vision does not state what a company “should do”. This needs more work! Review the Contactless Payment Outline in the samples tab in Blackboard.